Looking back at our course work this year I think there is definitely a lot of improvement from last year’s course work in terms of skills and efficiency in dealing with technical issues. However even with this we have still faced some difficulties such as organising our self well enough to get our filming schedules right. Also we repeated certain mistakes such as using two different types of camera to film, however this time we were much quicker to solve this issue than we were last year.
These are frames from our teaser trailer that we think conforms to conventions and challenge conventions:
It was very important for us to make sure that people were able to remember our title so we chose a title that did not only link to our narrative but was also catchy and comical. The title created irony, the fact that someone imperfect can become perfect and this added interest to our film. I think we could have definitely appeal more to our target audience by having the title in complete small letters, like we see in ‘twilight’, its more casual and appeals more to a younger audience just like we tried to do with our film.

We used this as part of our teaser trailer, although these kind of scene is usually seen more in romance films rather than romantic comedy films but we decided to use this because we realise that ending our teaser trailer with this shot will raise the question as why he is imperfect and also the silhouette effect gives the impression that they are walking into the unknown. Apart from viewing it from this perception, this scene adds to the romance elements of the teaser trailer and it is more likely to tease viewers to want to know why he is imperfect. We might have over emphasised the romance elements that there wasn't enough comical elements to suggest that is a romantic comedy and this may be one of our weakness but the romance elements according to our audience feedback teases them more so we decided to leave it this way and also because it is a teaser trailer, it is not necessary for us to give too much away.
We decided to add the 'Coming Soon' to our teaser trailer because we realise that this is something we see in almost every single teaser trailer unless those who perhaps already have a set date of release. We also realised that this is part of the whole idea of teasing our audience; the fact that there is no set date provokes them to find out more information about the film. We could have had a better effect on our audience if we stretched the length of this shot and have the voice over emphasise the ‘Coming Soon’ more to add to the excitement. I also think we could have increased the size a little bigger and reduced the font of the ‘official’ website so it doesn’t take the focus off the ‘Coming Soon’, this would have made it more unmissable.When it comes to editing we used only cuts between the scenes to create some sort of fast pace teaser trailer, however we didn’t want it too fast because we wanted our audience to be familiar with our characters. At the beginning of our teaser trailer we had shots of our Mariah’s idea of ‘Imperfect’ guys. I think this challenged convention because usually in teaser trailers, we only see the two main character, other characters are usually introduced to us in actual trailers. I think we definitely could have used more transition in our teaser trailer to give it a variety such as fades instead of using only cuts. However I think keeping the editing style simple worked better because using fades would have made it look more like a trailer than a teaser trailer.
I think our film poster is very conventional to other romantic comedy film posters. We stuck to convention by having the names of the actor and actress at the top. Usually in romantic comedy films, the stars name are put above to attract fans of the stars to go and watch the movie, we decided to imitate this in our poster. We also kept conventions by having the billing block at the bottom alongside the date, not only is this conventional but this also avoids the date and billing block taking away the attention from the main poster. The colours we used for our poster is very typical of the genre, pink, orange and white usually symbolising happiness and femininity which our audience are. We broke conventions however by having the two main characters sitting on the bench usually they are in action standing and looking at the camera rather than sitting. However, we could have perhaps have the image more to the middle where it is more conventional to have but our audience feedback suggested that the poster was fine the way it was so we didn't change this either.
Although we initially agreed we were going to use ‘TOTAL FILM’ as our film magazine title but we changed this during the process of making our magazine and after the feedback recieved from our audience for the first magazine cover we made. We decided to use our own Magazine title because it would be more convenient to adjust the font and colours as much as we wish and this was one of the problems we faced when we were in the process of creating our first Magazine cover. As usual we used pink and white to connect our three elements together and also to stick with typical romantic comedy film convention. We also stuck to conventions of a film magazine cover by having all our cover lines in different fonts and sizes. Although this isn't our final version of this magazine the newer version is much similar except the issue date is changed and the underlined cover line too. Magazine covers usually have the lead actress/actor on the cover rather than both character, however they may have the other character on a different issue. We went for the whole casual look in our poster by having the two main characters sitting on the bench; we also tried to have this element on our magazine cover by taking a more natural picture of our actress and this goes against conventions because actress/actors are usually in more action pose rather than relax and I think this works well for our product. However, we could have chose a different location for our image instead of a feild to give our magazine cover a bit more glamour.
How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts
Our target audience research suggested that the main target audience of Romantic Comedy films is 16-24year olds and this allowed us to target our product to a more mainstream audience. Also our genre and film targeted more feminine audience therefore the reason we used colours such as pink and orange. The reason why these were our target audience was because Romantic Comedy Film narratives are usually based on modern society ideals such as being independent and having an equal say in relationships where as older audience much prefer traditional way of doing things so younger audience are much more likely to relate to the characters and their storylines. Maybe to get more accurate research on our target audience we should have done more secondary research on the internet, although we did this and the age group came down to the same result but we could have looked at more websites.
We wanted all of our three elements to link together so we chose a colour scheme that will link all three products together. We also had a tagline in both our teaser trailer and on our poster, also by having our female lead actress in all three element linked our products together. I think if we had the same font for our title in all three products this would have had a much better impact but we realise that different fonts worked well for the different products that we had.
For our teaser trailer they main difficulties we faced during the production stages was finding our main actor on time, we also had to overcome issues such as our characters being off centre however this was easy to overcome because we were much more familiar with Pinnacle this year and was much quicker to respond to this problem.
With the Magazine cover, we realised our ‘issue date’ and release date didn’t match so we had to reload it back onto Photoshop to fix this problem. and this was one of the dissadvanteges of Photoshop because some times it 'merges' ur layers together and you cannot edit seperate layers for example the title without affecting the rest of the magazine cover. We didn’t really face any difficulty for our poster apart from having to wait till we were filming before we could take the image for it because we wanted our actors to be in character.
What have you learned from your audience feed back?
Before we submitted our work we wanted to make sure that our target audience were happy with the outcome of our Poster, Magazine Cover and Teaser Trailer. This will enable us to judge whether we followed our research into all three formats well or we needed to revisit some of them and make some adjustments.
How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planing and evaluation stage?
What have you learned from your audience feed back?
Before we submitted our work we wanted to make sure that our target audience were happy with the outcome of our Poster, Magazine Cover and Teaser Trailer. This will enable us to judge whether we followed our research into all three formats well or we needed to revisit some of them and make some adjustments.
For our Magazine and poster, we displayed it on the projector in front of our fellow peers in our Media Studies class, we figured that since most of them enjoyed romantic comedy and fell into the age range of our target audience it will be a good Idea to get feedback from them. Although they had already seen the first drafts of both our magazine cover, poster and suggested a few changes which we took on board, we wanted to see if our revision had paid off. Last time we showed them both, their key points were the image being over posed, the lack of variety of fonts for the different subtitle and the dull colours of our Magazine Cover although we did explain the red was meant to signify love and romance but they suggested that this was too strong a colour. This time around we had a lot of positive feedback on both and most of the participants suggested they will be interested to watch it if they saw the poster or magazine cover somewhere.
For our teaser Trailer we uploaded it onto Facebook where we are aware most of our target audience will visit because of our research into where other romantic comedy films will tease their audience.
The feedback we got was positive however there were comments about the shaky camera; they suggested that although not a major issue but quite annoying. We did acknowledge this was a mistake but after discussing it as a group we decided not to change this because it will be time consuming and the shaky camera gave it a ‘home video’ effect and a sense of reality so we decided to keep this.
We also had a criticism about the voice over being a little flat, although this is very important but we felt like making the voice over too comical will take away the romance in the Teaser Trailer. However we chose to lengthen the time spam of our title in our tear trailer and the ‘Coming Soon’ after a few people suggested it was too short. We figured this is very important because wanted our audience to be familiar with our title and to be teased by the 'Coming Soon'. Over all we had really positive feedback most people said it was teasing because they we not sure why the main character was imperfect and wanted to watch more to find out.
We also designed a questionnaire where we were able to preview our teaser trailer before we submitted it to our teacher along side with our poster and magazine Cover.
Our questions entailed:
1. How old are you?
2. Do you feel all three products suggest the Romantic Comedy genre?
3. Are the images on the Magazine and Poster appropriate for our film?
4. Do you feel the font works on each of these products?
5. Would you go and see the film after seeing these three products?
6. Which products do feel appeals to you most?
7. Are there any improvement you would suggest?
Most of the questions had the same response where all our peers was happy with our products and fell into the same age range. Except question seven and eight, these answers was generally down to personal choice and also question eight was a open question and individual response differed.
For the open question we had one person comment about the lack of emphasises on the ‘prejudice’, although we did at the beginning consider including something that related to why he was ‘imperfect’ but we decided against it because we felt we will be giving too much away and the whole point of a teaser trailer is to keep our audience guessing and wondering.
We also had a comment about where we placed our variety of shots in our teaser trailer from our teacher; we definatly could have spread out our shot to give it more variety, for example from a close up to a long shot instead of close up to another close up. However she acknowledge she was not our target audience so we decided to ask the class if they felt this was an issue but they were happy with where everything was so we decided not to change this either.
Over all, we adjusted certain things in our teaser trailer such as the length of the title but we didn’t have any major criticism that we felt will cost us a lot of marks so we are happy with the result.
How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planing and evaluation stage?
Having a younger target audience was a great advantage to us because it allowed us to use the latest social networking site and other current media technologies. The technologies we used in our planning, production and evaluating stage include:
- Pinnacle Studio, we used this in the editing stage, we also being more familiar with this software from last year was a bonus to us because editing was much faster this year and this gave us the opportunity to have enough time to ask for audience feedback. However the disadvantage of this software is that work can easily be lost if the computer crushes and unlike Microsoft, there isnt a recovering tool if your work wasnt already saved.
- We used blogger to record all the process of our development, planning, post-production stage of our course work and evaluation, this enabled us to keep track of our progress and share the experience of our production with other groups. Although this website is very useful but the tools available for us to use when typing isnt enough so sometimes we have to write on Microsoft Word and then copy and paste onto blogger and this can sometimes be irretating.
- Facebook being a very popular networking site enabled us to post our final product in order for our target audience to give us feedback on what to improve and what they like about our product. We are aware that Facebook can also have its issues with privacy and Hacking so we asked the permision of our actor in order to do this.
- We also used Edirols and Flip Cameras to record our voice over and video our animatic, these two devices are very portable and made it easy for us to carry it around the school instead of having an actual camera which would have been more of a handful. However with an Edirol, you have to have to plug headphones into it in other to hear back at what you have done and this was one of the the disadvantages.
Over all this year was much easier in terms of being familiar with the process of our production; however we have had to deal with some difficulties in other to have a polished product. I could go back and repeat this process I will make sure that we filmed our teaser trailer first before anything to give us the chance to get it to a very high standard, however saying this I think our product this year is definitely a step up from last year.
As a group we have all played a major part in acheiving our target, we found our we music from a copy right free website provided by the Howard School where I study Film Studies and with permission from my teacher we were able to use this wesite to download our music. I think my filming skills has definetley improved this year, during the filming proccess i was able to direct the characters to where the should be which was harder last year. We were also able to take decisions much better this year and really pulled together as a group.
As a group we have all played a major part in acheiving our target, we found our we music from a copy right free website provided by the Howard School where I study Film Studies and with permission from my teacher we were able to use this wesite to download our music. I think my filming skills has definetley improved this year, during the filming proccess i was able to direct the characters to where the should be which was harder last year. We were also able to take decisions much better this year and really pulled together as a group.

















